a Whisper

Hit Harder Than a Whip

I wasn’t planning to post this confession…
but some truths refuse to stay quiet.

And let me warn you now—
this is not for beginners.
Not for the faint-hearted.
Not for the men who only think they understand surrender.

I sat back, sipping my wine as he talked,
watching him over the rim of my glass
while I waited for my cigarette to burn itself out.

He spoke in circles,
trying to explain parts of himself he barely understood.
I didn’t rush him.
I never do.

I listened calmly—
like a predator studying the rhythm of its prey.
Slow. Patient. Intentional.
The kind of patience that looks soft on the surface
but hunts with surgical precision underneath.

I let him talk.
I let him breathe.
I let the room fold itself around him
until the tightness in his shoulders softened
and his guard slipped just enough
for me to step through.

Because that’s how it should be, isn’t it?

A true master understands
the before and the after.
The care and the cruelty.
The soft hand that draws a man in,
and the quiet dominance that keeps him
exactly where she wants him.

He thought

he was just talking.
He didn’t realize he was already surrendering—
slowly, beautifully—
in ways men never notice
until it’s far too late.

Before he even knew it,
he had drifted right under my spell.

He poured me the drink I chose,
his hands moving automatically,
like a marionette guided by invisible strings—
strings I held effortlessly.

And no—
I didn’t need to shout.
I didn’t need to bark orders.
I don’t operate in noise.

I whispered.
Phrases that mirrored his desires back at him.
Words that teased, provoked,
and pulled him tighter into the world I was shaping.
The world he couldn’t walk away from.

He followed every instruction I gave—
not because he had to,
but because he wanted to feel
the reward behind my tone.

He wanted to taste the edge of my approval.
He wanted to reach the place
where my pleasure becomes his oxygen.

I didn’t tie him—
but he felt bound.
I didn’t lift my whip—
yet he felt each command
like a stripe across his will.

That’s the beauty of real control:
you don’t need rope
when a man willingly tangles himself in your voice.

I watched him until his knees trembled,
until his eyes shifted into that hungry, desperate shine
that only comes from a man
who has forgotten where he ends
and where I begin.

“You want this?” I asked.
“Earn it.”

And he did.
He gave everything.
He followed the rhythm I set
as if the world depended on it.

Only then—
only when he proved himself—
did I give him what he came for.

A reward he will replay in his mind
for nights to come.
A moment he will try to chase
but will never duplicate.

His devotion,
his surrender,
his collapse at my feet—
these are my joy.

These are the confessions
you don’t write…
unless the truth refuses to stay quiet.

Mysticflower